Woodland Dreams - a poem by Sea Opal - All Poetry
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Woodland Dreams

The forest is tattered in the wind
shaken in the songs of rain
left to dry emerald feathers
and shed dryad's dressing gown
russet and golden leaves
in spells upon the ground

Over my head the swallows rest
in amber twiggy branches
call to each other like ladies
sipping tea in sylvan shadows
as woodland animals arrive
to mix tracks along the trails

In the pink and golden morning
as sunbeams dance through the trees
the silence is an orchestra
that sounds like a peaceful stream
listen and see the orbs and spheres
in the forest of woodland dreams
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Charlieboy - OMG! You really knocked this one way out of the park. The fluidity and raw emotion grabs you by the neck tie and drawls you in, deeply. Every once in awhile the planets are aligned. this is a trip through a black hole where the imagination just runs totally wild. A+ my friend
on Aug 13 2022 02:41 PM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - Charlie thank you for such an awesome comment on my poem. I appreciate it! 😊
on Aug 13 2022 08:34 PM PST   x  edit
Susanne Donoghue - Such a lovely, ethereal poem!
on Aug 13 2022 11:38 AM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - Thank you Susanne for your wonderful comment 😊
on Aug 13 2022 08:32 PM PST   x  edit
Misganaw4 - Terrific. The images I could see in my head. It was just majestic.! I loved how you painted all these pictures of nature. Just soothing and lovely! As a nature lover and nature poet I totally relate to this poem! bravo
on Aug 12 2022 01:35 PM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - Thank you Misganaw4 for such an uplifting review of my poem! 😊
on Aug 12 2022 02:48 PM PST   x  edit
Prasad Rao pindiprole - Beautiful, wonderful, mind blowing. So well written poem, i love to follow you and learn the beautiful art of writing poems. I bow to thee.
on Aug 11 2022 10:45 PM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - Thank you Pindiprole for your uplifting words 😊
on Aug 12 2022 07:41 AM PST   x  edit
ShayarGumnaam - Wow, its so beautiful ... keep writing its wonderful to read
on Aug 11 2022 10:01 PM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - Appreciate your lovely comment 😊
on Aug 12 2022 07:39 AM PST   x  edit
Brandon836 - The words written provide such a vivid and calm imagery. Thank you, it made my day.

Good poem
on Aug 10 2022 07:00 PM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - Thank you Brandon for inspiring review of my poem! 😊
on Aug 10 2022 07:03 PM PST   x  edit
Seashelle - Made me feel like I was in the forest.  I could see the colors and feel what you’re describing
on Aug 10 2022 06:52 AM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - I appreciate your uplifting words so much! 😊
on Aug 10 2022 07:02 PM PST   x  edit
risingdawn615 - I love the description of the wind-shook forest and the pink and gold morning sky.  It almost seemed as if the trees were talking to other plants and animals.  A beautiful dreamy poem.
on Aug 10 2022 05:42 AM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - Thank you risingdawn615 for lovely comment! 😊
on Aug 10 2022 07:01 PM PST   x  edit
GaryRubin - Your woodland dream is picturesque and loaded with utopian emotions. I adore your final stanza.
Sublime pen Sea Opal 🙏😎
on Aug 06 2022 05:09 AM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - I appreciate your review so much, thanks Gary and have an awesome day 😊
on Aug 06 2022 08:59 AM PST   x  edit
Jawahar Gupta - amazing
Great
on Aug 06 2022 01:04 AM PST   x  edit
Harvey Burklo - nicely done
on Aug 05 2022 10:07 PM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - Thanks so much Harvey 😊
on Aug 06 2022 08:57 AM PST   x  edit
Nidhi Bhandari - A Wonderful read..

Nicely done
on Aug 05 2022 09:55 PM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - Thank you Nidhi😊
on Aug 06 2022 08:56 AM PST   x  edit
Lisha1singh - Beautiful work and lovely use of similes and metaphors!
on Aug 05 2022 09:34 PM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - Thank you Lisha for wonderful comment 😊
on Aug 06 2022 08:56 AM PST   x  edit
autodidact905 - There really is no Muse quite like the Muse of nature... specifically the ocean. Well orchestrated!
on Aug 05 2022 09:21 PM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - That is so true and thank you for uplifting words on my poem😊
on Aug 06 2022 08:55 AM PST   x  edit
autodidact905 - Thank you for sharing an articulating your vision of this verbal picture.
on Aug 06 2022 09:12 AM PST   x  edit
Oméga.á.m. - Amazing poetry
Congratulations FPP
on Aug 05 2022 09:21 PM PST   x  edit
Oméga.á.m. - Stunning array of language skills and imagery
on Aug 12 2022 02:01 AM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - Thank you so much 😊
on Aug 06 2022 08:54 AM PST   x  edit
Daniel Duhaime - nice nature themed poem

Lovely.
on Aug 05 2022 09:17 PM PST   x  edit
Daniel Duhaime - whimsical

Lovely
on Aug 11 2022 10:41 PM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - Thank you Daniel 😊
on Aug 06 2022 08:53 AM PST   x  edit
JesnaSajan - Beautiful lines Enjoyed it very much

Thank you!
on Aug 05 2022 09:15 PM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - Thank you JesnaSajan for lovely comment 😊
on Aug 06 2022 08:53 AM PST   x  edit
Captain-1 - Karina,  Wow this is awesome you ha e such a great talent this is beautiful,  Thank you for sharing. My friend.

Great!
on Aug 05 2022 07:08 AM PST   x  edit
Prontobard - A beautifully descriptive piece, I love the 'silent' orchestra—tranquility certainly has its own tune.
on Aug 04 2022 04:28 PM PST   x  edit
Sea Opal - Yes it does, and I appreciate your uplifting words 😊
on Aug 04 2022 07:14 PM PST   x  edit
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