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The time traveler disappeared and I was left standing over my dead child.

How many more of my offspring would they kill?

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How many more are you gonna make?

What are they doing to their kids to make them into someone a time traveler wants to kill.

Naming them Ahshleeigh Nevaeh.

You would think it would be simpler to just kill the mother at that point? Or is what she does after the children are gone the whole point of the time traveler's mission?

Once the child is killed no one realizes they grew up to be a monster. They juat know that a sibling died in the next kid's childhood.

Noone said the parent was the father

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u/AquariusBlue899 avatar

Depends on when the insurance stops paying out

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Interpretation: Mother is bad enough to make their children come back in time to kill themselves once born, and the pattern repeats with each child

u/Overquartz avatar

That or that all the kids end up someone even worse than Hitler so literally all the time travelers go right for whatever kid is born.

u/Francescomania avatar

That's litteraly the movie " The butterfly effect "

That's what I thought.

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Alternatively: Would my spouse or the police ever beleive me?

This started as a "Go back to kill baby evil" thought experiment from the parent's pov but I wanted to make it vague enough that it could be the parenting, environment, fate or just something else that always causes a monster to manifest.

u/Writeloves avatar

I like it! It definitely achieved the desired “What goes wrong?” effect when I read it :)

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I don’t get it

u/dragon_dez_nuts avatar

They time travel to off themselves

u/Reddidnothingwrong avatar

I interpreted it as the children all ending up the type that someone would timetravel to kill before they can do whatever they were going to do

Which would really speak to the parenting

Oh thanks

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I interpreted it as baby Hitler’s mom

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Is your name Sarah Conner?

Interpretation:

The time traveller is evil and wants to push the mother hard enough to make her snap and become...

There seems to be a common denominator here. Why didn't the time traveler take care of the problem once and for all?

The first sentence feels like The Time Travelers Wife The second sentence would be from the Time Traveler's perspective though, except its from the Time Traveler's genes that led to the kid's death

u/SkyraStar avatar

Yes