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Literature- The Dressmaker Views and Values
« on: March 12, 2013, 04:49:40 pm »
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Hello all. I received 39/40 for this Views and Values essay, but I feel like it doesn't warrant that mark. It seems that my teacher marks quite leniently, and I would like to get some honest feedback to prepare myself for the exam. I'm looking more for general feedback, so having read the novel isn't imperative. Thank you.

In a coherently structured essay, discuss the views and values endorsed, challenged and left unchallenged in The Dressmaker. Explore the context of the times, the way it influences the views and values, and the different ways in which people may interpret the themes.

The ostensibly peaceful decade of the 1950s is often looked back on as the halcyon days of morality and the nuclear family. Under the calm, country-town veneer of Dungatar, Victoria, Rosalie Ham explores its inhabitants' needs and desires, base and noble. Her novel, The Dressmaker, follows the lives of universally recognisable characters. The conflicts, inner and outer, of desires give way to a largely pessimistic authorial view of the 1950s, with spots of love and beauty interspersed.

The over-arching but underlying motivation in the novel is the lust and denial of freedom. Every resident, with the notable exception of the McSwineys, has something they wish to hide. Nancy and Ruth's relationship exemplifies the difference between current times and then. Now, they would have nothing to hide. In the conservative 1950s, they are forced to conceal the relationship. This sentiment pervades the dusty, rural atmosphere of Dungatar. As Molly observes: "Everybody knows everything about everyone, but no-one ever tittle-tattles because then someone else'll tell on them." This notion is everywhere in Dungatar. The characters lust after their freedom, but are unable to see that by accepting others, they themselves would be accepted.

The townspeople's hypocrisy is exemplified by Ruth's actions. Her aforementioned relationship is kept a secret, out of need not want. She longs to not have to skulk around, getting rid of her girlfriend when Beula Harridene knocks. Yet she cannot afford Tilly the same privacy. Her blatant disregard of Tilly by opening her mail is another example of the residents' weaknesses. Tilly, by contrast, gives others the same respect she expects. When made aware of Irma's condition, she uses this knowledge only to help by cooking a batch of special brownies to alleviate the pain. Ham approbates this selflessness, and, by way of Beula, castigates the opposite. Beula defines her life by the lives of others. Their missteps and mistakes are her driving force. Ultimately, this leads to her ironic downfall, as she is nearly killed by Tilly's radiogramme as she snoops around. This association of negative consequence with negative action expresses Ham's contempt for those who do not respect privacy, and, in extension, fail to live their own life.

Expanding on this notion is the out-dated custom of marrying 'to save face'. In the 1950s it was common to marry after engaging in pre-marital sex. This giving-in to societal pressure is heavily critiqued in The Dressmaker. A picture of its effects is made by juxtaposing William and Gertrude with Tilly. Tilly is unmarried, despite having had a son. After the death of her boy, she remains a creative, independent woman. William is "very worldly these days", according to his mother. However, rather than having to "look much further than [Dungatar] to find suitable companionship", he succumbs and marries the first girl with whom he has a fleeting relationship. Ham continues the technique of associating negative things with negative outcomes. From the moment he marries Gertrude his agricultural aspirations are dashed. Instead of a new tractor, his money is spent on hats and dresses. By defining his life by the opinions of others, he suffers an ignominious future.

Tilly ultimately chooses the opposite path; the path of freedom rather than acceptance. Tilly desires to be free, free to wear what she wants, free to associate with whomever she wants and free to have sex when, and with whom, she wants. However, she is not without reservations. She longs to be accepted by the very same people she wants to be free from. When Teddy suggests that the town will have to get used to her, her response: "No... I'll just have to get used to them" elucidates her inner turmoil. Acceptance and freedom are portrayed as two parallel paths, never intersecting. One must choose, and the majority of Dungatarians choose that of acceptance. This choice is portrayed as homogenising, while freedom is a long, lonely journey. William has no future, but Tilly has torched her past.

The concept of marriage is explored extensively, but Ham does not offer a solution to the state of affairs in Dungatar. If one does choose, or is pressured, to marry, the life that results is not depicted favourably. Tilly's decision to stay a free woman is shown in a better light, but it is impossible to ignore the fact that she ends up alone, with her mother, son and future husband dead. She does have her freedom and independence left. This is Ham's take on the consequences of disobeying society in the 1950s. Her freedom comes at great personal cost. Ham laments the lack of liberty for woman in that period but does not present a triumph, however idealistic and anachronistic it would be. Reality triumphs in the end, proving that Ham's view of the reality of the 50s is harshly critical.

Compared to the horrors of World War Two, the 1950s were a time of remarkable peace, especially for Australia. However the threat of communism was ever-present, and in 1951 conscription was reinstated. These issues are notably absent from The Dressmaker, with the only political reference being "a punctured picture of Bob Menzies on the dartboard". This opposition to him is odd, considering that his socially conservative politics were in line with Dunagatar's residents' attitudes. Menzies advocated a return to traditional gender roles after the tumultuous war years, as well as increasing the role of the Church in Australians' lives. Dungatar largely abides by Christian values such as celibacy before marriage. However, the town has no minister to preach these values, instead the townspeople take their idea of morality into their own hands. Beula does this by gossiping, Mr Almanac by spiking the ointments of those he deems "sinners". This is similar to William's way of living by the views of others but the inverse. Ham castigates those who try to impose their views on others just as much as those who accept them. The result is a strongly libertarian outlook; live and let live.

Ham promotes the idea of pure, uninfluenced, true love. Neither Lesley and Mona nor William And Gertrude share this, as their partnerships are the result of succumbing to pressure. Tilly and Teddy though, do share real love. Rather than living together, hating the sight of each other like William and Gertrude, they have something special. They were "twinned beneath the close stars", they "made love over and over again and were made one in their intentions". Ham shows the power of love to create happiness, and the effects a lack of love has.

These universal themes are identifiable world-wide. In addition, Ham creates characters who have a simple trait which they exploit throughout the novel. This means that an understanding of the Australiana in the novel is not imperative for an understanding of its central tenets. A reader in Brazil who has never heard of Australian Rules Football will gain just as much of an insight into the human condition as an Australian.

Throughout The Dressmaker, Rosalie Ham explores the complexities of freedom in a pre-feminist revolution society. The established trends of the time that were later largely removed are critiqued for their hypocrisy and stifling of liberty and independence. Love; mother-daughter, mother-son and romantic is extolled as much as the lack of love in a marriage is lamented and attacked. The result is a uniquely human text, which is not limited by the culture in which it takes place and critiques.

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Re: Literature- The Dressmaker Views and Values
« Reply #1 on: March 14, 2013, 10:57:36 pm »
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Hello all. I received 39/40 for this Views and Values essay, but I feel like it doesn't warrant that mark. It seems that my teacher marks quite leniently, and I would like to get some honest feedback to prepare myself for the exam. I'm looking more for general feedback, so having read the novel isn't imperative. Thank you.
Hi, I'll give this some feedback but I feel that if your teacher has already given it an excellent mark, there's little I can really do. In your SACs your aim is to appease your teacher's criteria. Granted, the exam is a completely different beast, but it's also a different form of essay, so don't be discouraged. 

In a coherently structured essay, discuss the views and values endorsed, challenged and left unchallenged in The Dressmaker. Explore the context of the times, the way it influences the views and values, and the different ways in which people may interpret the themes.

The ostensibly peaceful decade of the 1950s is often looked back on as the halcyon days of morality and the nuclear family.  I admit that I had to google that word. Nice vocab and mention of social climate.  However, I never did write contextualising sentences in Lit - rather I would incorporate context into my analysis.  Under the calm, country-town veneer of Dungatar, How is this a value statement? How does it contribute to the way character's interact and their views and values? Victoria, Rosalie Ham explores its inhabitants' needs and desires, base and noble. Again maybe something more analytical like "  Within such a context, Rosalie Ham's novel, the Dressmaker, provides a critical overview of *insert socialpoliticaleconomicpositionhere of the fifties, ........* Her novel, The Dressmaker, follows the lives of universally recognisable characters. ...again....your comment on the author's critical evaluation is needed here, The conflicts, inner and outer, of desires give way to a largely pessimistic authorial view of the 1950s, good! :) with spots of love and beauty interspersed. Superfluous unless you're talking about the way the author considers the notions of love and beauty. Get what I mean? :)

The over-arching but underlying motivation in the novel is the lust and denial of freedom. Keep referring back to the author and /her/ motives and what she wants to portray. So could rearrange to " Ham critically examines lust and the denial of freedom...... Every resident, with the notable exception of the McSwineys, has something they wish to hide. With the depiction of " SPECIFICEXAMPLEBACKEDWITHQUOTE", the author castigates the clandestine nature of the villagers Nancy and Ruth's relationship exemplifies the difference between current times and then. Be more specific and succint. Suggestion: Moreover, through the portrayal of Nancy and Ruth's relationship/specificeventorsituationquote, Ham condemns 1950s conservatism and its intolerance of homosexuality.  Now, they would have nothing to hide. ( use further example from text to prove the contrast between current times and the period of the text. Always draw upon the text and analyse it to draw meaning. Try not to have sentences floating around if they are not anchored to quotes :) In the conservative 1950s, they are forced to conceal the relationship. This sentiment Vague. what sentiment are you referring to? pervades the dusty, ruraldusty rural = backwards? if so - make it more obvious. You can't waste a word here - each one has to contribute to your analysis. If it doesn't, then scrap it. atmosphere of Dungatar. As Molly observes: "Everybody knows everything about everyone, but no-one ever tittle-tattles because then someone else'll tell on them." This notion is everywhere in Dungatar. ok good you have a quote here, but you're not doing anything with it. What notion is expressed here? how does it add to what the author is trying to express? Is it kind of like..." portraying Ham's evaluation of conservatism and its repressive implications on the populace? The characters lust after their freedom, but are unable to see that by accepting others, they themselves would be accepted. Thus, Ham unveils the inherent contradictions rife within....yeah I think you get what I mean? Analyse, rather than describe, and keep referring back to what you believe is the author's intent.

 Linking word or phrase- In light of this revelation, Ham continues to exemplify the hypocrisy of intolerance ( make your topic sentence more conceptual  The townspeople's hypocrisy is exemplified by Ruth's actions. Her aforementioned relationship is kept a secret, out of need not want.  ok ok so maybe instead of all this just say: Ham protests the injustice within such a rigid social construct, with the depiction of Ruth's secret and illicit relationship " QUOTE" rendering ( draw out your interpretation of what the author is saying through this illustration) She longs to not have to skulk around, getting rid of her girlfriend when Beula Harridene knocks. Can you back this up with a quote and comment on its effect rather than just retelling the story? Yet she cannot afford Tilly the same privacy. Her blatant disregard of Tilly by opening her mail is another example of the residents' weaknesses. Tilly, by contrast, gives others the same respect she expects. When made aware of Irma's condition, she uses this knowledge only to help by cooking a batch of special brownies to alleviate the pain. Ham approbates this selflessness, and, by way of Beula, castigates the opposite.it's good that you're finally providing a view of the author's judgements, but it's too vague. Do you see how your evaluation has to be woven through your examples? In this way, the author encapsulates Beula as defined by the lives of others, thus demonstrating...... ( insert critical judgement here)Beula defines her life by the lives of others. Their missteps and mistakes are her driving force. Ultimately, this leads to her ironic downfall, as she is nearly killed by Tilly's radiogramme as she snoops around. This association of negative consequence with negative action expresses Ham's contempt for those who do not respect privacy , and, in extension, fail to live their own life. You need a panning out sentence here. but you provided Ham's expression of contempt goodgoodgoodyay. However do you think can you make the point bigger than just contempt for those who do not respect privacy? It just sounds a bit trivial to me. Isn't it a bigger idea than that? Like, perhaps contempt for a conservative society's surveillance of personal affairs? 

Expanding on this notion Furthermore, the author expands on such a notion though her scathing criticism of is the out-dated custom of marrying 'to save face'. In the 1950s it was common to marry after engaging in pre-marital sex. Weave context into example " The convention of marriage after premarital sex is condemned within "The Dressmaker" through the juxtaposition of...... see how this is much more succinct? This giving-in to societal pressure is heavily critiqued in The Dressmaker. A picture of its effects is made by juxtaposing William and Gertrude with Tilly. Tilly is unmarried, despite having had a son. After the death of her boy, she remains a creative, independent woman.thus illustrating the novel's endorsement of women's autonomy? William is "very worldly these days", according to his mother.WHAT IS THIS SAYING ABOUT VIEWS AND VALUES THOUGH? However, rather than having to "look much further than [Dungatar] to find suitable companionship", he succumbs and marries the first girl with whom he has a fleeting relationship. Ham continues the technique of associating negative things what things? with negative outcomes. From the moment he marries Gertrude his agricultural aspirations are dashed. Instead of a new tractor, his money is spent on hats and dresses. By defining his life by the opinions of others, he suffers an ignominious future.

Tilly ultimately chooses the opposite path; the path of freedom rather than acceptance. Tilly desires to be free, free to wear what she wants, free to associate with whomever she wants and free to have sex when, and with whom, she wants. However, she is not without reservations. She longs to be accepted by the very same people she wants to be free from. When Teddy suggests that the town will have to get used to her, her response: "No... I'll just have to get used to them" elucidates her inner turmoil. Acceptance and freedom are portrayed as two parallel paths, never intersecting. One must choose, and the majority of Dungatarians choose that of acceptance. This choice is portrayed as homogenising, while freedom is a long, lonely journey. William has no future, but Tilly has torched her past.
None of this has any comment of author's views and values, but you can fix this easily.

The concept of marriage is explored extensively, but Ham does not offer a solution to the state of affairs in Dungatar. If one does choose, or is pressured, to marry, the life that results is not depicted favourably. Tilly's decision to stay a free woman is shown in a better light, but it is impossible to ignore the fact that she ends up alone, with her mother, son and future husband dead. She does have her freedom and independence left. This is Ham's take on the consequences of disobeying society in the 1950s. Her freedom comes at great personal cost. Ham laments the lack of liberty for woman in that period but does not present a triumph, however idealistic and anachronistic it would be. Reality triumphs in the end, proving that Ham's view of the reality of the 50s is harshly critical.

Compared to the horrors of World War Two, the 1950s were a time of remarkable peace, especially for Australia. However the threat of communism was ever-present, and in 1951 conscription was reinstated. incorporate into analysis. If it's not in the novel, you don't really have to mention it. I know the prompt said, talk about what has been omitted, but againagainagain, it's more about value judgements that have been purposefully avoidedThese issues are notably absent from The Dressmaker, with the only political reference being "a punctured picture of Bob Menzies on the dartboard". This opposition to him is odd, considering that his socially conservative politics were in line with Dunagatar's residents' attitudes. Menzies advocated a return to traditional gender roles after the tumultuous war years, as well as increasing the role of the Church in Australians' lives. unnecessary :P Similarly?Dungatar largely abides by Christian values such as celibacy before marriage. However, the town has no minister to preach these values, instead the townspeople take their idea of morality into their own hands. Beula does this by gossiping, Mr Almanac by spiking the ointments of those he deems "sinners". This is similar to William's way of living by the views of others but the inverse. Ham castigates those who try to impose their views on others just as much as those who accept them. The result is a strongly libertarian outlook; live and let live. This paragraph is a bit weird in that, you're providing too much outside information. Stick to the points of view that the text remains silent upon. You have a legit point here, but perhaps make it more brief. Use the depiction of Robert Menzies on the dartboard as a springboard into your discussion, briefly mention his traditionalism and its pervasion into the town's social atmosphere through textual examples ( which you have here - you just need to polish them up and put them in analytical sentences

Ham promotes the idea of pure, uninfluenced, true love. yaaaaaaaay author's opinion Neither Lesley and Mona nor William And Gertrude share this, as their partnerships are the result of succumbing to pressure. Tilly and Teddy though, do share real love. Rather than living together, hating the sight of each other like William and Gertrude, they have something special. They were "twinned beneath the close stars", they "made love over and over again and were made one in their intentions". Ham shows the power of love to create happiness, and the effects a lack of love has. this paragraph is kind of  flippant and random because a) it's supershort 2) you only bookend it with critical comments rather than interspersing throughout 3) The rest is just retelling narrative 3) I'm not sure if it contributes meaningfully to the rest of your analysis

These universal themes are identifiable world-wide. Which themes? In addition, Ham creates characters thumbs up - you're telling us what the author is doingwho have a simple trait which they exploit throughout the novel. This means that an understanding of the Australiana in the novel is not imperative for an understanding of its central tenets. wait huh what has this got to do with anything A reader in Brazil who has never heard of Australian Rules Football will gain just as much of an insight into the human condition as an Australian.Wut. I suggest getting rid of this paragraph and the one before it unless you can make them substantial and relevant. Your essay ends in a fizzle, when it should end in a pop. Your paragraph on love would be a good way to finish, but only if you can build up your interpretation instead of compiling a paragraph of random quotes.

Throughout The Dressmaker, Rosalie Ham explores the complexities of freedom in a pre-feminist revolution society. Great! This is exactly the sort of statement you needed in your introduction.The established trends of the time that were later largely removed are try to avoid description Ham critiques the established social mores of the 1950s for their hypocrisy....critiqued for their hypocrisy and stifling of liberty and independence. Love; don't use semicolons like this.... mother-daughter, mother-son and romantic is extolled keep using this word and words like it. as much as the lack of love in a marriage is lamented and attacked pick one.. The result is a uniquely human text, which is not limited by the culture in which it takes place and critiques. Need a final overview of what the author is trying to communicate

1227 words.

I was initially reluctant to correct something that had already been marked by a teacher, but this is my honest opinion of your work:
1. You've definitely got the basic idea of how to write V+V
2. However, you need to emphasise your analysis of authorial intent, rather than just describing the events of the narrative. This makes your essay more analytical rather than just stating or describing examples eg:
"They are forced to conceal their relationship"
" Ham portrays Nancy and Ruth's concealed relationship as....."
3. You need to use more specific quotes in your examples.
4. Your expression needs to be more succinct
5. However, it's clear that you have a really really good understanding of your text and its concepts.

So well done on acing that SAC, but I think it would nevertheless benefit you to work on the above points^ :)
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Re: Literature- The Dressmaker Views and Values
« Reply #2 on: March 15, 2013, 04:56:07 pm »
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^just to clarify on lollymatron (who gave some excellent feedback!), the example of a passive sentence she gave is not actually a passive. 

An active sentence is a sentence where the subject (the main thing in the sentence - eg. the grass in the sentence "the grass grows") is the part of the sentence enacting the sentence's verb.  So for instance, "the grass grows" is an active sentence because the verb (to grow) is being enacted by the subject (the grass).

A passive sentence is one where the subject is having a verb being enacted upon it.  An example here is "the grass is being grown" - the grass is not doing the growing itself, but is having the growing being done to it by an external agent.  As you can see, the thing doing the verb can be omitted in a passive sentence (you could say "the grass is being grown" or "the grass is being grown by a priest", and both could make sense), whereas in an active sentence the thing doing the verb necessarily has to be there ("the grass grows" can't really be expressed without the grass being in the sentence).

It is usually recommended one writes in the active because it is more obvious and easier to follow for the reader.  Passives get all confusing and paint more ambiguous pictures in our minds of what is going on, although they can be very powerful rhetorical devices at times.
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Re: Literature- The Dressmaker Views and Values
« Reply #3 on: March 15, 2013, 05:13:25 pm »
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I deleted that part because I realised it was incorrect. XD

But yeah, knowing about passive voice and when/when not to use it is still useful:

"Steve loves Sarah." "Sarah is loved by Steve."