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The Mountain

The mountain is like an old woman
in a wornout dress.
The pockets are filled
with stones and gravel.

Her feet are buried
in the ground
like a silent, submissive wife,
shading the sun.
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Iff Ur Abs - Very good use of creative simile mate...loved them both!!

Keep going
on May 15 2024 02:20 AM PST   x rate: , ,     skip edit
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